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Who are you ?
i say to the crying child
in water reflects...
Bayushi Tai
i say to the crying child
in water reflects...
Bayushi Tai
Not what I expected...
The idea is that the man see himself when he was a child and vice versa, so the child he used to be is not happy with what he becomes.
P.S. : Thanks again Solarts !
The idea is that the man see himself when he was a child and vice versa, so the child he used to be is not happy with what he becomes.
P.S. : Thanks again Solarts !
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I might have missed something, English is not my native tongue, but is that 3-7-5 form you have?
A very strong and dangerous emotion for a samurai to have, and considering the indication that he is a Scorpion, might he be a Black Sheep? Or is it simply that his duty towards superiors is that harsh?
I might be mistaken in this, as I said earlier I only dabble in haiku, but your reference to water, is it autumn? I don't quite know where, but I think I read that some part of the haiku should indicate the season in a indirect manner.
I enjoyed it immensly, you wouldn't have gotten lots of questions if not
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*Bow*
A very strong and dangerous emotion for a samurai to have, and considering the indication that he is a Scorpion, might he be a Black Sheep? Or is it simply that his duty towards superiors is that harsh?
I might be mistaken in this, as I said earlier I only dabble in haiku, but your reference to water, is it autumn? I don't quite know where, but I think I read that some part of the haiku should indicate the season in a indirect manner.
I enjoyed it immensly, you wouldn't have gotten lots of questions if not
.*Bow*